Poor Imp

Oy, you might have her focus-- over focus--on one part of her body. 'Tis common with women, and others, who suffer from obsessive-compulsive disorders, or eating disorders. She might not ...

Hullo Jovie. ^_^ Welcome to YWS. You can't go wrong here if you love to write, though you might go write--er, right. Pardon the pun in impish bad taste. Anyhow, ...

Er, I have been doing this nearly every day. But I've been sans computer and internet and so sadly sans postings. Anyhow, I'll try to post a few in the ...

Ach, I'll be back if I can. But I wanted to leave a remark as a placeholder: you made me grin, da? I love the mathematical--or, er, not so maths-related--mutterings ...

Oy, I've always loved your work, Tinny. ^_^ This, 'tis so mellow in cadence, and keeps the low-key in its dictions--even, small words. But there's something fraught beneath. What isn't ...

Forgotten Hope: A dagger pierces, a shout echoes. Clinging on, yet soon panicked into letting go. I like playing with the disjointed--it can add depth to a piece, but most, ...

Hullo. ^^ Rather off-the-cuff, I feel left hanging and hung. Hung, in the positive sense that you've set up the air of the thing with such dour-glower and gloom, that ...

Er, 'like so many foxes'.

Oy, thanks Jenna. ^_^ 'Tis a gift. IMP

Er, me?

It's lovely. There's something in the end that seems more ambiguous than the beginning and mid-bit. Is the time still baby-time, or is it nebulous - in and out of ...

Hoy. And 'tis Imp, to scrimp and scribble like ink riddles -- or rills -- all over the scraps slight-sight, stills and bits of prose tracked in by truth. More ...

Er, mostly back. See edited first message. IMP

Oy, one only gets better by imitation and practise. ^_^ Welcome to YWS Me! What you like to write then? Fiction of any genre, or anything really? Anyhow, either critiquing ...

Ciao Olli. ^_^ Not to be repetitious, but it is difficult to give any apt feedback to something so brief. As it is, there's not enough material to judge whether ...